Well, musical taste is always very subjective of course.
I think there is definitely something into it and therefore it has potential for sure! I enjoy the gloomy and oppressive atmosphere especially in the slower parts. Reminds me a bit of projects like Diseased Oblivion and related, weird hybrids of different styles. The drums sound a bit "plastic" here and there. The overall result could be improved soundwise with an appropriate mix and mastering (this would fix the drums I think) to make the sound (especially in the faster parts) more nuanced and powerful without loosing the raw style.
Personally, I think it's cool for a first release and I'd like to hear new material when it's done!